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Wind Waker Fours SwordsChp 1 by ~Midori-Rinku:iconMidori-Rinku:



Hello there everyone! This is my first chapter of Wind Waker: Four Swords edition! It’s kinda hard to explain what the story is about because it’s a crossover but not an OMG I’ve travelled through time/space whatever story. It’ll make sense when you read it.

Blue and Green’s (and eventually Red and Vio’s)  personality are based on the Four Swords + manga (mainly because they are descendants of them) but you don’t have to read the manga or play the game to read this story. Though it might help.  

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You all probably know the story of the Hero of Time and how he defeated evil man and saved the lost kingdom but you most likely don’t know of another story. The hero of the Four Sword.

Before the kingdom disappeared was attacked again this time by a different evil, a Sage and a shadow and threw the land into chaos. But then a boy appeared wielding a sword that turned him into four separate people. The Four and eventually the Shadow defeated the Sage and stopped the evil he tried to unleash.

When the Four came to put the sword into rest it was supposed make them one again but it didn’t. Was it a blessing or a curse?

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“Big Brother!” a voice cried out from a small island. It came from a small girl of the age of ten. She had blonde hair tied up into two piggy tails and wore a dress that had flowers on it. Her name was Aryll.

Aryll was on a mission; this mission was to find her Big Brother for their Grandma. She brought her prized telescope to her and looked around with it.

“Big Brother!” she called out again. After a while she pointed the telescope to a look out tower. Aryll grinned brightly and ran over to the other side of the island and climbed up the tower.

On top of it was a boy sleeping. His messy blonde hair was the same colour as Aryll’s. He wore a blue and white shirt and orange pants.

“Big Brother! Blue!”

Blue blearily opened his eyes at the sound of his sister’s voice and looked around. Finding no one he set his head back down. Aryll frowned and poked the side of his head.

“Blue wake up!” she whined poking him again.

Blue opened his eyes and glared at his sister, “Why should I?” he grumbled.

Aryll grinned cheekily, “You obviously don’t remember what day this is,” Blue merely raised an eyebrow at her, “It’s your birthday!”

That got a reaction.

“What?” exclaimed Blue jumping up in surprise.

Aryll nodded grinning, “Uh-huh. Grandma sent me to find you. She wants you to come back home. She probably wants to give a present to you. Now go and get it!”

“Yeah, yeah I’m going,” Blue said then muttered under his breath, “Miss boss boots”

“I heard that!” Aryll said as Blue climbed down the ladder.

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Meanwhile on an island called Headstone (which coincidently had a giant stone of the shape of a head) there was a pirate ship parked nearby it. On the island were four people on it. They were all surrounding the stone that appeared to be blocking an entrance to a cave.

The first three were arguing while the fourth one gazed around the island looking bored.

“I say that we just blow it up,” declared a young girl with greenish blonde hair. She was glaring sternly at a burly man.

“But Miss Tetra people would notice if a giant rock like this just disappeared,” protested the burly man.

Tetra raised an eyebrow and looked around, “Who Gonzo?” she asked, “The closet people around are miles away. Besides I don’t think there going to care.”

The third person adjusted he’s glasses as he looked up at Gonzo, “She’s right you know, “he said, “What is with you today Gonzo? Usually you don’t care.”

Gonzo shrugged his shoulders, “I don’t know Mako. It’s just getting a bad feeling about this place, yeah? Like we shouldn’t touch it.”

The man with the glasses snorted in amusement, “What could possibly go bad? On a place like this?”

As though someone or something wanted it to prove him wrong a loud screech echoed around the place.

“That,” said the last person. He was a boy around the same age of ten with the same hair colour as Tetra. He was pointing something in the sky.

There was a lone small bird in the sky at least it looked like a small bird. If it was small as it looked it should have been smaller that high up a whole lot smaller. It let out another loud screech and swooped down at the four pirates.

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Aryll sat in the lookout playing around with her telescope with a flock of seagulls surrounding her waiting for Blue to come back.

She wondered what present their Grandma was going to give him. Grandma had been secretive about it the whole time but Aryll saw her with blue fabric. She had probably made another blue shirt or something.

The only problem was that where Grandma had got it. Now that Aryll thought about it she was missing a dark blue dress.
“Hey,” came Blue’s voice came from behind her.

“Hey Blue,” replied Aryll turning to look at Blue. She stopped and stared at him for a few moments before continuing, “Why are you wearing a dress?”

Blue’s face turned a bright red as he glared at her, “It’s a tunic Aryll,” he said gritting his teeth, “That’s what they wore in the olden days.”

“So that’s where my blue dress went,” muttered Aryll absently completely ignoring Blue, “You could have told me you wanted to wear a dress Blue.”

‘So that’s where Grandma got that fabric. I am wearing a dress,’ Blue groaned inwardly outside he grumbled, “Did you even listen to me?”

Aryll grinned innocently and changed the subject, “Anyway it’s time for me to give you a present! Close your eyes and hold your hands out.”

When Blue reluctantly did so, Aryll picked up her telescope from the floor and placed it into his hands. Then Blue opened his eyes and looked down at the present.

“A telescope,” he stated dully.

“Yes,” nodded Aryll enthusiastically, “You can burrow it for a day and today only. Go and have a look into it.”

Blue rolled his eyes but ended up humouring her. He placed the telescope to his eye and looked through it.”

“Look down there!” Aryll ordered pointing down out of the look out, “At the post-box.”

Her brother did so zooming in on the object of question. Standing next to it was a tall man with hawklike eyes and a beak for a nose. He was putting paper into the letterbox.

“Do you see the postman?” asked Aryll eagerly when Blue nodded she grinned brightly, “Isn’t he cool? He’s a-“

“A Rito, as bird person I know. We talk to him about every single day,” interrupted Blue still looking through the telescope. The postman was now looking up in fright, “I wonder what he is so frightened about.”

They both looked around for a couple of moments until Aryll pointed up, “Up there!” she cried out. Blue did so and gasped in surprise. Above them was a large brightly coloured bird flying above them with a figured in its claw.

Suddenly a cannonball appeared out of nowhere narrowly missing the bird. It came from a pirate ship it kept on firing cannonballs at it and missing. There was a pause and the bird turned its head to look at the ship.

That was a mistake.

A cannonball suddenly shot out from the ship and hit the bird right on the face. The bird screeched in pain and dropped the figure right into the forest.

Both brother and sister just stood there for a couple of moments until Aryll snapped out of. She turned to Blue and looked at him with big puppy eyes.

“You have to go and help that person Blue!” she said, “There are monsters in that forest.    

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Over in the pirate ship people we arguing again. This time with Gonzo (again) and another burly man, Senza.

The young boy from before shook his head and turned to Mako, “How long do you think there going to argue for?” he asked groaning clearly annoyed.

The other pirate frowned looking equally annoyed, “Probably an hour at least. Two hours at most. Hopefully.”

Mako stood there standing at the bickering duo, when he heard a slight clattering noise. He turned to the boy who had taken off his boots and was taking his jacket off.

“…Green,” Mako said trying to look stern, “Whatever you’re thinking to do your not going to it.”

Green looked up and smirked, “And you’re going to stop me how?”

They both stared at each other Mako still looking stern, Green grinning until the bespectacled man sighed.   

“…Fine,” said Mako turning around, “But if Miss Tetra asks I didn’t see you.”

There was no reply. Instead there was a splash. No one else noticed a blonde haired boy swimming towards the island.

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About half an hour after that event Blue walked out of one of the houses holding a sword. He had got it from a man named Orca who was the resident swordsman. Blue had asked for a sword, which Orca had given him, but not with learning some tips.

Tips that took at least half an hour to learn.

“Stupid Orca,” Blue grumbled as he walked to where the forest was. The forest was on top of the island and fairly easy to get to but because no one goes up because of monsters it became overgrown and hard to get to. A sword would make it easier to get through.

Plus it didn’t hurt to have a sword. There monsters in the forest for goodness sake.


Blue looked up from his sword as he came to the path up to the forest and stopped for a second in surprise. There were two people there, one was Aryll and the other was a kid he never seen before. Which was weird because he knew everyone in the island. What made it stranger was the fact that the boy had no shoes on and his clothes were slightly damp.

“Big Brother! What took you so long?” complained Aryll when Blue joined him

Blue ignored her instead he turned to the boy, “Who the hell are you?” he asked not even bothering to be polite.

“I’m Green. I’m from that pirate ship over there,” Green replied while Aryll glared at her brother for being rude, “I got fed up of waiting for Gonzo and Senza (two the pirates) to stop fighting so I swam over here so I can help my sister, Tetra. I was going to go myself but Aryll made me wait for you.”

Blue just looked at Green blankly for a couple of moments.

“You swam from that pirate ship,” he repeated slowly pointing at the ship in the distance, “To help your sister, Tetra just because two people were fighting?”

Green nodded, “Yeah,” he paused and glared mockingly at Blue, “You make it sound like it’s bad. I swam he because they were going to take forever to stop arguing. Mako said they would be arguing for about an hour and that’s at least!”

“Whatever,” Blue said shrugging turning round he drew his sword and slashed at the trees blocking the way and walked up the path. He paused and turned around when he realised that Green was following, “You not coming.”

Green blinked in surprise, “Why not?”

“The same reason why Aryll is not going. Your both too young and you’ll both get in the way,” he glared at both of them just make sure and walked up the hill.

The journey up the hill was… uneventful to say the least. Just a few bushes here and there and a lot of overgrown grass. When he got to the bridge however…

“Wow that bridge is really rickety,” came Green’s voice from behind Blue.

Blue screeched in surprise and almost fell off the bridge. He turned around at to see Green starring at the bridge frowning.

“I bet sooner or later the bridge is going to break,” the boy in green concluded nodding to himself.

“What the hell are you doing up here!?” Blue yelled pointing at Green accusingly.
“Saving me sister of course,” replied Green grinning. He looked at Blue oddly, “What did you expect me to listen to you?”

“Yes as a matter of fact I did,” said Blue crossing he’s arms and glaring at Green… again. The person in question completely ignored the fact that he was getting death glared at as though he was used to it. Blue sighed, “You not going to listen to me aren’t you?”

Green shook his head grinning.

“Fine you can come,” said Blue relenting, “But only if you stay out of the way.”

Green cheered happily and ran across the bridge causing it to shake and towards the entrance of the forest.

Blue yelped and gripped onto the railing of the bridge and don’t rock the bridge!”

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“Well this is fairly uneventful,” Green sighed looking bored.

“Uneventful! We were attacked by monsters!” yelled Blue. He obviously wanted to yell some more but he was out of breath.

When they entered the forest the two of them instantly saw Tetra who was still unconscious and stuck up a tree. But they couldn’t reach her from where they were. So the two of them went right into another part of the forest… and was attacked by a monster.

Blue attacked by straight away while Green who had no weapons at all just stood there and watched his friend deal with it. Eventually Blue defeated it but was slightly out of breath.

They went into the next area and were attacked again. This time Green did something he picked up a broken wooden sign and hit it over the head while Blue distracted it.

Green shrugged inspecting the sign he picked up, “That’s because you’ve never seen monsters before. Those are the weakest type. Did you know that you apparently have a fairies spring in this forest?”

Blue blinked completely thrown off by the question, “What?”

“This sign says you do that’s all,” Green said showing the sign to Blue, “Well anyway lets go. The next area is where Tetra is right?”

Blue nodded, “Yes it is. Be prepared though there is probably more monsters there.”

The both climbed up to the next part ready to fight (Green was using a the sign as a weapon) but when they found none they instantly relaxed. But of course the peace wasn’t going to be there for long.

Somewhere above them a bird screeched. Green jumped thinking it was the large bird before but instead there were two smaller sized ones carrying to monsters that looked like the ones that attacked before.

The birds dropped the monsters and the fight begun. Blue instantly ran up to the first one striking it before it had the chance to defend itself. After a couple of more strikes the monster died, disappearing in a puff of smoke.

Green on the other hand just waited for the monster to attack. When it did he sidestepped it and attacked from behind striking it over the head. After that the monster turned and tried to punch the boy. It never did because Blue came out of nowhere and killed it.

“The weakest kind huh?” said Blue smugly, “It looked like you were going to lose.

Green pouted, “I would have one if I had a weapon. Alright?”

“Urggh,” Tetra groaned from above them. She seemed awaken by the noise of the fight. She blinked a couple of time trying a to wake up. When she realised where she was Tetra started struggling- and broken the branch falling to the ground groaning again.

“Ouch,” muttered Green and Blue winced in agreement. Tetra looked up sharply when she her brother’s voice.

“Green what are you doing here?” she asked in surprise then noticing that Green wasn’t wearing any shoes, “and where are your shoes?”

“I’m saving you of course,” said Green as though it was obvious, “and my shoes are back on the ship.”

“He took them off to swim over here,” said Blue answering Tetra’s un answered question.

Tetra jumped and turned and looked at Blue looking at him from the boots up, “What’s with the get up?”

Blue never got to answer because a person yelled from the entrance. A burly man who he figured might be Senza or Gonzo.

“Miss Tetra!” the man cried running towards them and got up to where they were with ease, “and… Green! What are you doing here?”

“Never mind that,” said Tetra, “What happened after I was captured by that bird.

Gonzo quickly recounted about what happened to a bemused Tetra.

“So I was dropped on top of a mountain top?” she asked rhetorically, “Well lets teach that bird some manners!”
“But what about Blue,” Green asked pointing to Blue.

“Who cares? Let’s go,” Tetra ordered impatiently running out of the forest with Green and Gonzo following obediently while Blue walked at more leisurely pace grumbling something about pirates.

He rejoined the pirates outside the forest where they stood looking around, Blue barely acknowledged them because he noticed something more interesting. His sister.

“Hoy there Big Brother!” Aryll yelled from the other side of the bridge. Blue bit back the urge to scold her for coming up there and waved back. It was then when everything went wrong for Blue.

A loud screech was heard for the third time on this island and of course came the bird soon after it. The pirates cursed and prepared to defend themselves but it wasn’t going for them. Instead it swooped straight at Aryll catching her in its claws. After that it flew off to the north.

Blue cried in rage and tried to run after the bird instead falling right off the Cliffside. He was about to fall to his doom when Tetra grabbed a hold of him. Blue struggled still trying to chase it.

“Stop struggling!” snapped Tetra her hold on him almost slipping. Then she added softly, “I’m sorry there is nothing you can.”

Blue could only watch as the shadow of the bird disappeared. It gave another screech as though it was mocking him.
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Well here it is. This story took DAYS to write and usually takes a couple of hours to do. If there is any mistakes tell me and I'll fix them up.
Now I'm going to bed *is tired*

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~KnightOfModernDay:iconKnightOfModernDay: Apr 3, 2008, 8:44:48 AM
It's good, but apart from having Green arrive in the story, it's the exact same thing as Wind Waker. You have a couple of mistakes here and there. For example, some quotation marks ("") are missing; (Blue yelped and gripped onto the railing of the bridge and don’t rock the bridge!") this sentence is a bit confusing, and in this one, (Plus(,) it (would)n’t hurt to have a sword. There (are) monsters in the forest for goodness sake). So overall, some punctuation mistakes, missing words and a few homonym confusions. You should write, take a break and reread your stories out loud so you see your mistakes...

I loved the Wind Waker but I'm not sure that I want to read the same story with only three characters added (Green, Red and Vio). But hey, if it is different after this chapter, the reader will now be guessing, which a writer wants to do, since the reader will want to read on.

Nice effort and keep at it.

P.S. You have well portrayed Blue and Green's personalities. Good work!

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~Midori-Rinku:iconMidori-Rinku: Apr 3, 2008, 1:57:58 PM
Thank you for the coment. Dont worry about it being exactly same as Wind Waker. I'm planning to follow the basic story (Like getting the pearls etc) but there are going to be quite a bit of differences. I just need to get Red and Vio into the story...oh and somehow get Green to follow Blue to the Forsaken Fortress. He is being a bit stubborn about it.
And I'll fix up the mistakes soon thank you for that as well.
p.s. I knew I got Blue right but I thought Green was out of character. I'm glad he wasn't

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~blondiecatxd:iconblondiecatxd: Apr 10, 2008, 1:44:55 PM
are red and vio gonna be in the story?^^
~Midori-Rinku:iconMidori-Rinku: Apr 10, 2008, 7:58:07 PM
Yep ^_^. They appear next chapter. Well at least I plan to. Cant be a Four Swords story without those two.

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~blondiecatxd:iconblondiecatxd: Apr 11, 2008, 3:59:36 AM Mood: Love Dazed
thank you!! because vio is my fav link
~Midori-Rinku:iconMidori-Rinku: Apr 12, 2008, 4:48:16 AM
Yeah I kind of figured that. ^_^ I read your profile.

Everyone here seems to like Vio the best don't they? I feel like I'm the only person who likes Green the best.

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~blondiecatxd:iconblondiecatxd: Apr 12, 2008, 6:07:38 AM Mood: Joy
hehe green is cool too^^

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~Midori-Rinku:iconMidori-Rinku: Apr 12, 2008, 6:17:09 AM
Of course Green is cool. He's doubly cool in my fanfic because he's a pirate =D.

But its obvious Vio has a large following *points to blondiecatxd's sig* somehow I knew that was going to happen one day.

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~Tailia-the-cat:iconTailia-the-cat: May 24, 2008, 7:55:56 PM
This is a very nice story ^^
though it is like windwaker.
I had fun reading this though :D

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